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| MarkedTarget6 | PIE | 12 | Aug 16 2008, 1:41 AM EDT by Ricador | ||
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once i ate a pie and liked it...THE END
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| Danstanta | 'Hellmen Vilra PART 3' PLEASE READ MY STORY, VERY INTERESTING | 0 | Aug 1 2008, 10:50 PM EDT by Danstanta | ||
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' WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU FATHER, YOU ALMOST KILLED ME SO IT'S MY TIME TO KILL YOU!'; So Hellmen got his sword and cut of his fathers arm. He was still remembering the past, So he cut of his other arm and his too legs, His father was shocked and didn't know how he was so strong know. Lord Alvren said 'Please! Spar me!'; Hellmen said 'WHAT! spar you, after almost killing me? NEVER';Then Hellmen cut of his head and Lord Alvren was no more splatted with blood. Hellmen was so exited that he completed his mission, After that The stranger said ' WOW, Hellmen, what was amazing!'; Hellmen did a bow and then The stranger told him his name, It was Ennen, He said, I am you're lost brother. Hellmen was in shocked, But then Ennen said 'Do you want to live in with forever?'; And Hellmen said 'YES!! yes please!'; So the hated Father died and life was in peace
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| Danstanta | 'Hellmen Vilra PART 2' PLEASE READ MY STORY, VERY INTERESTING | 0 | Aug 1 2008, 10:49 PM EDT by Danstanta | ||
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Which I grew tuns of rage circling in my body. But later, Ive entered his house. And told me if I was to start today and the night or in the morning. I told him at the morning. He said 'Fine';
Then he showed me to my bedroom and closed the door, I fell asleep in a second. -LATER WHEN HELLMEN WOKE UP- Hellmen got out of his bed and started to train with the stranger. When they started to learn, He knew Hellmen had a lot to learn about. And knew he had to work very hard. When Hellmen turned 27, He was a legendary warrior. With a clawed armor, His Horns we're even bigger and sharper, If anyone even poked it, They would loose blood quickly. So, Later that day, The stranger read the news, They found Hellmens father and his location. Hellmen knew it was his chance to rise. The news said he was in the country of Jordan. It took them months to reach the country but, After they reached the country, Hellmen was raged to kill his father.The stranger was very happy for Hellmen. After Hellmen went to his fathers village and ruffly told a guard 'WEAR IS LORD ALVREN!' Lord Alvren was Hellmens father, And the guard shockingly said, 'Oooovveerr Thhheir!'; SO Hellmen found his father and said > TO BE CONTINUED
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